Duran Family

Duran Family

Sunday, September 26, 2004

An observation

I have to teach a creative writing/journalism class at my church this evening. An assignment I gave two weeks ago was to observe someone, and write down the observation so that we can create a clear picture in our minds.

I don't know if this is a clear observation, but this is what came out while watching my husband. Can you tell me what he's doing?

Lengthening shadows
Cloudless sky
Not a breeze was felt

Mower working
Man pushing
The grass is green

Sweat glistening
Legs moving
Going around in circles

Face steady
Eyes intent
Getting the job done.

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